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 Where do you go when you die?
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 If i didnt have my parents i would have killed myself by now.need soem help?
i just feel horrible i have a math teacher that is driving me insane i wanted to kill myself since the day i stepped in her door at the beggining of the year. she piles homework on me andwonders why ...


 Why do people laugh at me when i go outside?
Why do people seem to laugh at me when i go outside and face the world? People just always seem to look at me and alot of others will laugh in their cars. I am a 17 year old indian guy and consider ...


 How long should you mourn before you carry on with your every day routine?
I'll try and keep this short :)

A very good friend of mine was only 27 and killed by a drink driver two weeks ago.

After this I started over eating, stopped going to the ...


 Are you scared to die? Why or not?
Many people have died since my life began and since my Granmother passed on the 22nd of December I feel kind of lost and scared of death. Mostly when I am alone and the kids are asleep.......


 Does life get better or worse as you get older?
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 Shall i commit suicide becasuse i am depressed?
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 Females only! How old are you and How many hours of sleep do you get a day on weekdays?
i need to do this for my math class Please help me Thanksss!!...


 Bipolar???
it all started 5 months ago with my aunt dying, i started picking fights with my friends and family. I only like hanging out with 2 of my friends. I have been really depressed and I don't know ...


 I cant stop cutting myself?
I have been cutting all over my body for about 6 months. On my legs arms and sides. No matter how hard i try i just feel like I have to keep cutting. Its too the point where all i can think about is ...


 Is it weird that I'm affraid of penutbutter?

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I'm afraid I'll suddenly become allergic to it and my throat will close and I'll die
cause I ...


 I m afraid of the computer, how do I stop my fear??
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 I Accidently Cheated On My Girlfriend Last Week?
and I confessed to her, she hit me, ran out and broke up with me.

Then I saw her on campus yesterday all hugged up on some nerd. I was furious.

I'm just a vulnerable guy. ...


 Please would someone cheer me up?
Crying over work, family and boyfriend. No friends I can talk to, feel really low...
:-(...


 Why is cutting yoursef bad?
i dont understand why people freak out if you cut yourself, yea i know it means youre hurting inside, bla bla bla but everyone hurts sometimes and everyone else deals with it differently no one else ...


 What depresses you just at the thought of it?
I get really depressed when my get bloated and when I'm broke....


 If I die, will anyone care? (seriously)?
I have nothing to live for, and I give up......


 Suicide???
I'm on the edge of doing it.
My family hates me. My parents are acholics.
I think my dads abusive. I tried to help my mom, and get her to move, didn't work.
And everyone ...


 Please help me. Im feeling suicidal?
My ex said he doesnt love me about 4 months ago. im lonely and wish someone would love me. I cry sore at night with so much pain in my heart. I dont wana live anymore
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 Am i a freak; Not on looks or anything?
Am i a freak because i choose not to wear make up ?

If i wanted to i would and could, but i just choose not to because i think i look better naturally.

Its just the school im ...



Jes S
Will u read my poem?
i came into this world screaming
by age 17 the fight is gone

i want it to end
with every hit i take
it gets harder to remember who i really am

thinking back to how i was
i dont know where i messed up
but i cant erase what ive done

i smile when i want to scream
im good to everyone except myself

i look down and see what i have done
i know my scars will never fad
neither will my pain

i want you to quit staring at me
you dont who i am
or what ive done

i want it to over
a time say good bye




i wrote this in 5 min
what do u think of it
                     




Jason C
It's awesome for 5 minutes.
Sounds depressing.
At least you aren't physically hurting yourself.
(Or at least I hope not)
Poetry, Music, and Art in general are great ways to relax.


jim
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It has powerful and dark themes, however the word choice could use work. It is a poem... be poetic. Let the words flow.


pxk8524
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wow in five minutes?
its pretty good i guess


Sylvia C
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I found your poem interesting but it concerns me. Are you talking about you're own personal life if you are please talk to someone - anyone who will listen to you a friend, teacher, counsulor or you're doctor. It could be all you will need is some meds for depression to start feeling better about yourself but do it as soon as possible for you're sake.
I can only hope that you're poem is not from personal experience because you seem to have a talent but either way don't ignore it. Take care


bambino_babe_27
Very good poem put it in a book


I know daa Muffin Man. :]
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its great! good work for just 5 minutes! dont listen to the second answer i think its great


ipodlady231
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well, uh, it's pretty good for 5 minutes. lol. i liked it though


Juan L
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Its sad and emotional, but its good to share your feelings, and people shouldnt cut themselves, it just leads to pain


ruby(:
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good poem
y r u asking us though?


Maxmillian
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Good, good. Probably the best English poem I've ever seen. 'Cause I'm not an English, I don't have any racial comments.


nvrletyoufall
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it is deep.. just dont share the five min part. a poem like that sounds like it took a lot f time and feelings, but overall awesome!!


Dennis M
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I think you have issues with cutting yourself from some kind of depression your in, please get some help no one should feel that way.


anitral10
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i think that its good but you should check some of the spelling.
and i think that you have true potential


M
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Real good I like it.


eve43
i write poetry myself and i think this is really good


Carry
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Hmm, I like it. It really relates to me and my past, and how I messed up badly at a point in life so I understand it well. By any chance does it relate to yourself?


mf mf mf mf mf fmf mf mfmfmfmfmf
it expresses your inner feelings and concerns, if it is a relief for u then good


curlielox2002
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PRETTY GOOD


Take A Breath
This is a good poem.


♥ Gina ♥
5 mins? wow this is a great poem.... u used to love to write poems still do.... if u can write that good of a poem in 5 mins just think how good a poem u could make in an hour, day, ect....


itchianna
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Horrible sad and a few missing words, read it aloud. For instance: you dont who i am?


bamfan876
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5 out of 10


effstawp
The lack of capital letters really expresses your raw unjust emotions of anger and anticipation.



... Or it just further proves that you wrote it in five minutes.


Glowfish
"will u read my poem?"
"i want you to quit staring at me"
~You really crave attention, but you dont want people starting at you like your weird. You want them praising you or feeling bad for you.

Sorry, bad poem I am not going to lie like everyone else did. I am suprised it even took you 5 minutes to write that, no offense. Sounds like a cry for help, someone should call the police and have them trace the account to your house. Then they can take you away and evaluate you / Admit into a mental hospital.


Word.
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A little too complain-y and straight-forward for me. There are no illusions, no analogies, nothing. It sounds like you're just talking to someone and separated some of the sentences by making them into stanzas. Not my cup of tea, maybe you should spend a little more time than 5 minutes and stop trying to get people to say how talented you are for writing something so 'deep' so 'fast'. Maybe you should take those five minutes and put it towards writing something great instead of something sub-par that every teenager on the block could create.

Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net down.
-Robert Frost


Gawaine R
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You want to draw attention to yourself by screaming but you don't want people to stare at you. There's a bit of a split here in your desires - it might be good to contemplate what it is that you really want. Every teen thinks her pain will never fade. Pain can be stubborn, but it's not eternal. The poem is certainly very emotional and direct - it's a good way to express yourself, so keep on writing.


Jaz1
It sounds like a desperate cry for help. I hope it wasn't from your own personal experience. The writing is good, but it made me feel sick that someone would just quit on themselves by trying to commit suicide. Theres 1-800 numbers out there you can call.


Noreen
its ok... its normal. It's ok for a 5 minute poem i guess. Nothing special though


Geary
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sounds almost emo.


That One Guy
I PERSONALLY think its pretty Emo, but yeah overall good


Dreamer with a Voice!
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This is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read! So sad though! Please tell me it's not true!


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